Originally posted by rapfamily4
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I'd suggest making the barrel of the weapon thinner, but longer. You know, he doesn't necessarily have to fire big missiles. Micro-missiles are cool too (I admit, I liked that weapon in Titanfall and I'm biased

I'd also suggest removing the short cable on the inner side of the arm and replace it with some other mechy parts instead. The long one on the outer side of the arm is fine, I think.
I have no particular opinion on the hunchback posture. Darkloser likes it, I'm not sure what to think of it.
Helmet is looking better! Removing the big filters helped a lot. It's still not there, but it's much better. To be more specific, right now his head looks kind of flat. Try making that head/helmet more horizontally longer or just generally rounder. May I suggest these as inspiration?
On his right lower arm I'd suggest removing those 2 weird tubes. You could replace it with some small wrist pockets or simply just make it a cool looking armor plating. Oh and make the armor plating on the arm also a bit more connected. Right now it looks like that plate on the wrist is very disconnected from the rest. The hand and fingers could use more protection as well.
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